Comments on: Sonnet 1 RP http://richpor.wordpress.com/2008/01/15/sonnet-1-rp/ One Man trying to make a dream come true. Fri, 26 Dec 2008 19:14:43 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: anon4him http://richpor.wordpress.com/2008/01/15/sonnet-1-rp/#comment-14 anon4him Wed, 16 Jan 2008 15:59:05 +0000 http://richpor.wordpress.com/2008/01/15/sonnet-1-rp/#comment-14 haha, yup, clear as mud ^_^ haha, yup, clear as mud ^_^

]]> By: Keith Porterfield http://richpor.wordpress.com/2008/01/15/sonnet-1-rp/#comment-12 Keith Porterfield Wed, 16 Jan 2008 01:02:11 +0000 http://richpor.wordpress.com/2008/01/15/sonnet-1-rp/#comment-12 I have experienced a loss in that I loved, but was shut out because of circumstance. Her and I have known each other for some time. We have been through many trials. When this poem was written, he was expressing his "love" quite loudly via online forums. Therefore, the last two lines of this poem, to me, mean: Less broken love- Their love is less broken than the love that remains within me for her. More spoke- He expresses his love more fervently. But is his bane?- Is his love the bringer of ruin, death, or destruction. A love without the trials to bear in vain.- They have no past to pull them down. However, there is a good chance that he will not be around after April. This is where the 'in vane' part comes in. She has sacrificed an important part of her daughter's life to endulge in this guy for a few months. Hope that made everything clear as mud :) I have experienced a loss in that I loved, but was shut out because of circumstance. Her and I have known each other for some time. We have been through many trials. When this poem was written, he was expressing his “love” quite loudly via online forums.

Therefore, the last two lines of this poem, to me, mean:

Less broken love-
Their love is less broken than the love that remains within me for her.

More spoke-
He expresses his love more fervently.

But is his bane?-
Is his love the bringer of ruin, death, or destruction.

A love without the trials to bear in vain.-
They have no past to pull them down. However, there is a good chance that he will not be around after April. This is where the ‘in vane’ part comes in. She has sacrificed an important part of her daughter’s life to endulge in this guy for a few months.

Hope that made everything clear as mud :)

]]> By: anon4him http://richpor.wordpress.com/2008/01/15/sonnet-1-rp/#comment-11 anon4him Tue, 15 Jan 2008 21:34:11 +0000 http://richpor.wordpress.com/2008/01/15/sonnet-1-rp/#comment-11 I was really liking this poem up until the last 2 lines... I don't quite understand them. Would you greatly mind explaining them, so I may understand and enjoy the whole poem? ^_^ I was really liking this poem up until the last 2 lines… I don’t quite understand them. Would you greatly mind explaining them, so I may understand and enjoy the whole poem? ^_^

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