good with words

good with words

good with words<–Want to Hear it?

You know that I’m good with words right?
Well, this feeling is so deep in my heart
That when I try to tell you how deeply I care
I have no clue where to start
It’s the way that you’re all about me
As I am all about you.
It’s the way that we do for each other
Just because we want to.
It’s the way they tried to keep us apart
But no matter how hard they tried
We knew through dreams and subconscious things
That dreams had our souls tied
How we lied to our hearts, but our hearts wouldn’t lie
We cried when we tried it apart
One little way to describe this vibe…
It’s some sort of magical art
I’m thinking, “How Great Thou Art”
GRAND, like the powerful part
I want to be gentle, because I know that we’re dealing
With delicate things at this point
Untangling the thread that binds us together
Like tendons to bones at the joint
I want to go slow cause I know that our future truly depends
On how we proceed and that we need
To preserve this thread at the ends
Where we have tied knots in certain spots
With lots of good people involved
They deserve the best of our nerve as they served
To help us evolve
I want to be strong, hold you in my arms
I want you to feel peace when you rest
Your warmth when you’re cold
Your youth when we’re old
Simply give you my best.

For now I’ll save the rest
Be quiet; we’re taking a test
The birds are building a nest
While “we wonder which way”, quo the quest.

Until next time…

Rich Por


2 Responses to “good with words”

  1. 1 anon4him March 28, 2008 at 8:20 pm

    Wow! This is incredible! I absolutely LOVE it! I love the lines “Untangling the thread that binds us together/ Like tendons to bones at the joint” … wow… what an image! I’ve probably told you before, but I’m no good with metaphors or analogies, but you seem to create the sort of images I can really feel and relate to. To sum it up, you are good with words ^_^

  2. 2 Adam Garcia May 15, 2012 at 8:37 pm

    In full amazement . very well written and spoken. truly talented

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